lovely carefully done intro.

very nicely done and clever playing.

all i might suggest is trying via editing/plug in reduce the fret noise if you can.

clever ending.

happiness.

om


my songs....mixed for good earbuds...(fyi..my vocs on all songs..)
https://soundcloud.com/alfsongs
(90 songs created useing bb/rb)
(lots of tips of mine in pg tips forum.)