Originally Posted By: dcuny

At the 7:30 mark, it had a long fade on distortion. I guess if you're going for a long song, you're going all in?

The majority of my songs have a feedback fade out. This one has the fade out built from a semi acoustic guitar, a Big Fluff pedal, a 4x12 cab and VOLUME. It was the 1st guitar part recorded and proceeds for the entire song lifting and dropping as needed or as it sounded best. Still a WIP so I haven't decided where/when the silence wins as yet.

Originally Posted By: dcuny
Not sold on the melody - rhythmically repetitious, with no discernible chorus for a lazy listener like to me latch onto.

Yep, melody and it's rhythm repeat - it is deliberate - "honest". The vague hypnotic vibe thing needs it. The chorus, well, to my ears it does but they are both jaded and subject to the "repetition = truth" thing. I'll look into the changes though.

Originally Posted By: dcuny
It'll be interesting to see what another vocalist brings to the song.

Ditto...collaboration with the intention of introducing new ideas as well as talent.
Thanks, a few things for me to contemplate and work on whilst waiting for the external input.
Stay safe.

Last edited by rayc; 11/29/22 09:01 PM.

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rayc
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