Hi Bron,

I enjoyed listening to your song. I always like hearing what you come up with. You have a terrific sense of musicianship that always comes through in your work. You've got great chops.

I loved the 2-bar intro. I find it refreshing to jump into the song without a 4-bar intro. This is a device that people like The Beatles and Elvis (just to name a couple) have used with great success (e.g. "Hey Jude" has no intro at all and it was The Beatles biggest selling record). To answer your questions, this song felt a little bit long to me (over 4 mins). I found myself wondering if the 3 repetitions of the "And it takes some time to get better" sections were needed. The other thing that I noticed was that were times when your vocals disappeared into the mix and were hard for me to hear.

Please keep in mind that the above are just opinions and they didn't detract from my enjoying the song at all.

I'm ready for the next one now
Noel


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