Hi Greg,

This is another very good song from you.

I particularly liked the lyrics, chorus line and chord progression.

Also very good tuneful vocals.

Only one suggestion - the instrumental solo was down in energy, volume and quality compared to the vocals. Maybe there's a suitable soloist in BIAB 2023.

Keep up the great work.

Best Regards
Nigel


Nigel Spiers
Christchurch, New Zealand
info@nzacoustics.com