Good song and some interesting (and good) instrument choices.

As for the arrangement, I would wait until 0:59 with the drums to build up the song more slowly.

Mix-wise, the drums are too bright and could have a bit more low end (the latter may not be necessary if you turn down the highs).

But I already like the song as it is now. It's pretty awesome.

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