Bittersweet lyrics. Your vocals brings out the emotional experience of each word.

Melody is so satisfying. this song is better than you think.

My only suggestion, which is just a matter of personal preference, is that you don't need the answer-back vocals. Two things: You've got the chops to pull of the vocal build (which you did). They take away from your lonesome vocal. I'm curious to how it would sound without the BG vocals.