Super song

Outstanding lyrics, instrumentation, and mix

I agree with the vocal observations. You have a good voice so showcase it.

Also you might want to work on that ending

Great song


Doc-take it easy John this is just a sharp scalpel. It will not cut deep so don't worry.
Me-I'm not John
Doc-I know, I am!

64 bit Win 10 Pro, the latest BiaB/RB, Roland Octa-Capture audio interface, a ton of software/hardware