Super song

Outstanding lyrics, instrumentation, and mix

I agree with the vocal observations. You have a good voice so showcase it.

Also you might want to work on that ending

Great song


I think my wife has started to show the first signs of dementia.
She said she can't remember what she ever saw in me!

64 bit Win 10 Pro, the latest BiaB/RB, Roland Octa-Capture audio interface, a ton of software/hardware