Hi, Brad.

I'm so sorry to hear about your son.

You've written the goal of the song, and I think you've accomplished that in spades.

I like the mix, with the subtle harmony. The reverb helps place the vocal - you might even be able to add a touch more.

There was only one point - at 2:04 - your voice is a touch too loud relative to the mix. IMHO, feel free to disagree. laugh

The mandolin is a touch distracting towards the end. When that happens, I tend to be pretty brutal and just remove all the offending parts. Better to leave a listener wanting more than wanting less. Feel free to disagree.

I'd get other people's opinions before changing anything, though. I'd remove at the points where it's competing with the vocal, because that's the simplest and most effective way to solve a problem. But it's a lovely sound, so it would be a shame to lose it.

Good write, well sung.

Nicely done!


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?