Originally Posted By: musician17
Beautiful. Beautifully sung, really well written (wish you'd posted the lyrics, so I could follow along, but no worries, of course). The guitar playing (whoever is playing, haha) is also beautiful.

Not easy at all to sing this well. Bravo.

If I am to REALLY nitpick (and who am I to nitpick? but I'll do it anyway, haha ... please forgive me), I would just say that I would have loved your voice to have been EQed so that it has an ever so slightly darker timbre in it. It sounds really great as it is, don't get me wrong!!! but I just thought that a little darker timbre might give it a more smouldering, "real" feel to it. Bit like the difference between milk chocolate and dark chocolate, perhaps? But what do I know!!! :-)

In any case, loved it. Well done.


Thank you, really appreciate your comment.

I've added the lyrics a couple of days ago.

About the EQ of the voice. I usually remove a lot of low frequencies because I found that the result can sometimes be little bit muddy. But in this case I might've left them in.

I will certainly consider your advice in future songs.

Rob

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