Hello Mr. Music Student,

I am sorry you have been ill. Not fun. I will pray for you.

I don't have any technical advice or ways to help, just to new.

But I did listen to your pretty song piece. I like it just the way it is.

When I closed my eyes to absorb your song piece, I saw people dancing in nice flowly outfits free and happy. If you wanted a name that fit the style/ flow, mabye a good title would be
Free to Dance or Freedom Dance.

With all the work you put into it, you should be really proud, it sounds nice. Merry Christmas, cheryl anne