Originally Posted By: Ezekiel's Storm
What a heart-touching story lyric. Everything about this sounds good, particularly the guitar sound and the melody. Just as Ray said, the chorus stays with you. This one just shot up the Floyd chart.


Thanks, Scott...


Originally Posted By: tommyad
It's a good thing the tempo wasn't any slower or I might have ended up sobbing. Clever use of the 21,32,43. I always know the mix will be good, the choice and editing of the real tracks will be good and your harmonies will be spot on. So I concentrate my listening to your lead vocal and how the emotion hits me. Yes it worked-great job! Of course I study the write which is my favorite part of your work. This one is high up there along with many of your greatest hits catalogue. You are just really good at this, especially love songs. Looking forward to the next one, Tom


Appreciated, Tom....


Originally Posted By: F.M.M.
Hi FloyD I agree this is a bar razor. loved the way you choose instruments, for me the lyrics were very thought provoking and bittersweet express nicely. a well written story thanks for sharing, Eric


Thanks, eric...


Originally Posted By: Achordocaster
Hey Floyd,

I'm back! smile

This is such a nice listen. For sure up to your normal excellence! I love that chord progression. (Always have)

The instrumentation is wonderful. I really like the cello in the bridge! The story caught me a little off guard... wasn't expecting her to die.

Anyway, another song that proves what a talent you are! Nice job!

Greg

PS
I'm finishing up a new song and should be posting it soon.


Good to see you back, Greg...

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