Nicely done.

I know trying to get a synth to sound human is a task. You did a good job.

Nicely written lyrics and music to match.

My nit is with the bass line. It goes too low in a number of places which makes it almost non-musical in character. I'd rework it to be at least in the range of a bass guitar. But that's just me.

Aside from that... nice pop tune.


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