Originally Posted By: Guitarhacker
Nicely done.

I know trying to get a synth to sound human is a task. You did a good job.

Nicely written lyrics and music to match.

My nit is with the bass line. It goes too low in a number of places which makes it almost non-musical in character. I'd rework it to be at least in the range of a bass guitar. But that's just me.

Aside from that... nice pop tune.


Thanks.

I appreciate that feedback about the bass line - I will take that on board, and listen to it again to see where it could be re-worked.