Yes, the first thing that strikes is your excellent vocal quality. Good melody. Ray mentioned the de-essing, but I'm used to that in my songs. wink The abrupt change at 1:40 is something I agree with. I really like the mandolin solo. The ride seems a bit overpowering. Such a good song. I like the way you build it.


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marty

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