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THIS GLASS (SoundCloud)

_REMEX2.STY. Remex Modern Ctry 16ths Soloist
All RealTracks. Quintet. *** with Soloist ***Tempo=75 (65-90)
Instruments: El.Bass, El.Guitar(solo), El.Guitar, El.Guitar, Drums
RD: ModCountry16ths^02-a:Closed hat, Sync-kick, b:Ride, Sync-kick :Shannon Forrest
RT4020: Bass, Electric, ModernCountry16ths Ev16 075 , Michael Rhodes
RT4026: Guitar, Electric, Soloist ModCountryGrittyBrent Ev16 075 , Brent Mason
RT4021: Guitar, Electric, Rhythm ModCountryBalladPower1 Ev16 075 , Brent Mason
RT4023: Guitar, Electric, Rhythm ModCountryBalladPower8thsMute Ev16 075 , Brent Mason
Added: RT2690: Guitar, Electric, Soloist Slow16thsPopBrentSimple Ev16 075 , Brent Mason

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Howdy Dewey....

This is a good write....mix works for me.
Lead vox has a good melody & BGV's are tight and clear.
Well performed all around.

Back to it....

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A solid, enjoyable listen. The vocals are excellent.

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Excellent write, well sung and produced.

It seems redundant to talk about lyrics to the person who wrote this, but indulge me... I love how you used title object is as a device to tell a story, in a way that feels authentic and emotionally honest. You pulled me into the song, both with the sad backstory and the narrator's take away.

Top-shelf writing!


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Dewey, this is one great song.
I really liked your vocal on this one.
Great lyrics.
Super drums!
Great mix.


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Standout chorus!

Expertly crafted lyrics.

Production sounds good to me. Love the band.

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Fabulous melody and double plus so in the chorus.


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Excellent write, Dewey. I really like how you build it. Excellent vocals as always. I really enjoy the lyrics and how you brought the whole story out through that glass. The melody is so good, even just the two notes of "this glass."


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Thank you for all the kind words and encouragement everyone!

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A solid job all around.

Especially lyrically:

THIS GLASS
Was a cure and a curse
Delivered needed "medicine" that made life worse

Quote marks are mine.


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Dewey,
Excellent write. A+ vocals and lyrics. Good mix. Easy listen.
Thank you for sharing.

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Great storytelling, and the chorus is really good and catchy.
Enjoyed the listen to. A lot!

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Solid write, great vocal, nice production. I liked it, Tom

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Hello Dewey
long time no more heard from you
All the nicer that you have written such a great song again
Great played and sung
Sounds really good
Great work
Many greetings
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Great writing Dewey, love your vocals and your all around country sound. Nice production.

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Dewey...man that's a good song! great write and the production is superb...love the vocals (the harmony is top-notch)...a song about pain so poetically presented...I really enjoyed your performance and your production on this one...one of your best IMHO!


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Dewey,

A nice production and good vocals.
(the drums seemed too busy for the bridge - something more subtle might have been more effective there?)
Well mixed.

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Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Dewey,

A nice production and good vocals.
(the drums seemed too busy for the bridge - something more subtle might have been more effective there?)
Well mixed.

fj


I think you're right, Floyd! As you know, that's an easy fix. Thanks for the input! I've got some potential major lyric changes too that I'm thinking about as well.

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I like the song and production is solid. I agree with Floyd on the drums.

Maybe I'm missing something but I don't get it. What is the glass and what's so important about it? I kept trying to figure out what you were singing about. Was it a drinking glass or something else?


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Originally Posted By: Guitarhacker
I like the song and production is solid. I agree with Floyd on the drums.

Maybe I'm missing something but I don't get it. What is the glass and what's so important about it? I kept trying to figure out what you were singing about. Was it a drinking glass or something else?


Guitarhacker, Thank you for asking because I was second-guessing my lyrics on this one. As I noted in my response to Floyd, I was considering major lyric changes in order to clarify what "This Glass" was. I plan to re-write a few lines in this one and re-demo it so, if you are willing, I'd love to know if the pending changes clear up your confusion.

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