Deej...wow! that was so good...mid-tempo, sweet groove, most excellent lyric and melody, super bridge...your vocals are way cool and the falsetto on those finishing lines is the icing on the cake! There are a lot of thoughtful suggestions that have been made and I agree with many of them but your sensibilities are to be trusted...if you sprinkle some more spice on it it could give it some more character BUT if you call it done no one will complain...it's just a really fine song!


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