Deej56,
Cool tune, your fantastic vocal drive makes at least 1/2 of the tune. Nice bed. Very professional. Good balance, but...

since you asked. I thought that vocals are a bit dry. And that thing I mentioned previously.... about dynamics being a bit squashed. Perhaps Mp3 was loaded to soundcloud instead of 24bit WAV?

In any case, great effort. Enjoyed it and thank you for sharing.

Misha.