AC.

nice vocal emotion n' lyrics mate,...
liked the cello.

i really like those doubled vocs,

only idea ...maybe try the lead guitar with a higher harmony part ? ie low n' high ?

i just heard it that way in my mind.

great slow rock effort mate.

best

om


my songs....mixed for good earbuds...(fyi..my vocs on all songs..)
https://soundcloud.com/alfsongs
(90 songs created useing bb/rb)
(lots of tips of mine in pg tips forum.)