Hi Ray,

She sure has a lovely voice.

The best part for me is the harmony part at the end of the verses/choruses - spot on!

A few suggestions to improve what is potentially a very good blues:

1. Drop the lead guitar way in the background on the verses - it's not required and distracting from the lovely vocals.

2. Vocals in the verses need to be quite a bit louder. Plus some of the notes need manual volume editing.

3. Needs a bit of a tidy up with some vocal phrases out of time and a bit pitchy.

4. Could do with a guitar playing the offbeat only to augment the snare in the verses but this may not be possible given you are editing a finished instrumental song.

Most promising Blues and well worth spending a lot of time on it.

Look forward to hearing version 2.

Best Regards
Nigel


Nigel Spiers
Christchurch, New Zealand
info@nzacoustics.com