Hi Ray,

I remember this one from Al. I love minor key blues, probably my favorite thing actually.

I really like her voice, and I like the lyric she wrote too. It needs to be louder in the mix though.

The way I approach lead guitar with a vocal, most of the time the lead guitar should be doing fills around the vocal, not soloing while she is singing for my tastes. It needs to compliment the vocal, the call and response thing, not compete with it.

Towards the end it's ok for them to both play at the same time, just like the way you have it now.

You have the start of a top notch minor key blues song, looking forward to hearing where it goes.

Last edited by BlueAttitude; 03/22/23 12:44 AM.
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