Originally Posted By: B.D.Thomas
I like it, you play a nice bass motif and it's nicely arranged and mixed.

Overall I find it a bit monotonous, the same chords over and over again.

I would include more parts like the bridge to have more variety and keep the listener more interested in what might come next.

Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, obviously I tend toward repetition but monotony is not a good thing. This one has an A and a B phrase, I'll try to incorporate a C phrase on my next one . . . if can I remember crazy

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