Originally Posted By: vicarn
Hi Al, Ray and Alison.
This is smoothly done and well sung.
I have one suggestion as Verse 1 has a different rhyme structure to Verse 2.

Perhaps change it to:
"You look as though you've faced a 1000 fears,
Your eyes are red. Your nose is too.
And now you flood with all night tears.
Tell me what they did to you."

Vic

Thanks Vic,
Actually the rhyming scheme is the same - it's the 2nd half of V2 & that is in line with where V1 starts in the progression.

Cheers
rayc
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