Originally Posted By: Rustyspoon#
Ray,
Pretty cool stuff! A very good start. Good drive, composition, vocals(!), phrasing, bass all good. Mix balance of all instruments is fine but..
Dave said it better than I would about the lead guitar. So I +1 on his comment. What distracts me the most is that metallic bell sound ringing that is present throughout the tune. The "after touch" tail, not the "hit". I hope I am describing it clearly. In any case, good effort. Thank you for sharing.
Misha.

Thanks Misha,
I'll look into the annoyance factor - probably the delay on the guitar.

Cheers
rayc
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