Hi Laurent,

I hear a nice melody, with a nice violin ensemble (played by your synth) and the electric piano that makes this melody.
But I also hear it is not balanced.

Take that piano; at first I thought it was you on a keyboard. It sounds very 'midi', a bit stacato and loud, maybe 'too'.
And looking at your choice of instruments, you did a daring thing choosing the instruments you did. But you managed to achieve a 'classic' sounding song!
That's nice!

I was only wondering if you could play a bit more with the volume settings of your instruments to achieve a more intimate feeling.
You suite needs it, I think; to give body to that merveilleuse-feeling you want.

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130