Hi Ray,

I couldn't understand all of the lyrics. Pitty you don't had them in your post.
Beside that, it's a very nice punk song and like others say, you start with too soft vocals. Adjust them and the song gains importance / interest/joy.
At least it helps me understand Marty's sense of humor...
But I think you have a good song here, so turn up the volume of the vocals!

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130