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This Showcase is a great place to hang out and hear good music, and actually a lot of fun to just read too. Wait a minute! Right after I come out with Penelope you come out with Emily!! Just kidding!  But I actually got some feedback (in another place) that said we weren't allowed to use a woman or girl's name in a song, it was too "restrictive." I said what about Michelle? The answer? You're not Paul McCartney!! Kathy's Song?? You're not Paul Simon!! Ok, that makes total sense. ANYWAY, this is gorgeous and it does remind me of John Denver. Nice. Let's start a song with a woman's name in it contest, shall we?? David S: I'll also confess I was unaware of that name rule . . . but we all know that we as songwriters must follow strict songwriting protocol and that ignorance is no excuse. I am therefore actively engaging in a re-write to erase "Emily" from the lyric in her entirety. I simply need to find a three-syllable alternative that rhymes with "Emily". I have come up with the following two: (1) "Oohhhhh . . . nameless she"; and (2) "Oohhhhh . . . Yay for me" Happy to entertain any addition suggestions folks may have. Deej "Oh, Nameless Me" is a great title.
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Deej and John, this is absolutely a beautifully melodic love song.
Everything is absolutely perfect.
You best to date IMHO.
Doc-take it easy John this is just a sharp scalpel. It will not cut deep so don't worry.
Me-I'm not John
Doc-I know, I am!
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Very touching song. Lovely lyrics, so full of beautiful emotional pictures, delicate and charming. The arrangement, the melody and the vocals do perfect justice for the story. I can nothing but admire your scale of talent from gentle ballads to strong rock songs.
Janne
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What a lovely song, Deej. We also get a tender John Denver feel to this in the lyric and the melody.
Your vocal is excellent and that style works perfectly. We can see why you made no changes to the RT’s in it. The fingerpicked guitar was so good.
Janice listened first and followed me into another room to quote some of the lyric!
Great collab!
J&B
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As Robert already said, a dreamy arrangement that fits the lyric.
It's fine as it is, but I would have loved to hear some piano playing on this.
Lovely.
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Hi, DJ and John !
What a wonderful tune
so delicately performed !
Nothing less than a masterpiece !
What a superb co-op !
Congrats !
Cheers
Dani
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Brad, Hans, Mark, Mario, Janne, J&B, David and Dani:
Thanks everyone. Appreciate the listens and input very, very much. Some reaction to some of the specific comments: Hans: It may very well be the same Emily, but we’ll have to check with John to be sure. But if it is the same Emily . . . well, she gets around, is all I’m saying. David C: Hmm, didn’t think about adding a piano . . . you may be right about that. David S and Marty: NOTE: As it so happens, the song received a radio play on BBC Cumbria on its “Introducing” segment, which features local artists—never seems to lead to much, but still nice to get a play.
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What a lovely song. Very pretty lyric. Excellent backtrack perfect for the song. Really really nice vocal. Well done Deej
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Deej,
That folk rock sound is a great choice and right down your alley vocally! The acoustic guitar that you used really puts the beauty in this one! IT's a lovely tune! Thanks, TB
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Hi Deej56,
Composition as I like them gently. The guitar whose rhythm is catchy with your lyrics. It's well done.
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Kindly regards
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Beautiful melody and lyrics. The bare accompaniment works well, and I wouldn't change a thing. This is a great song! You have topped yourself again. Did I say I like the song?
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Scott, Torrey, Derochette and Ezekiel:
Thanks for stopping in and giving this one a listen. Glad you liked it, and the feedback is much appreciated.
FYI: In addition to the radio play on BBC Cumbria noted above, today it received a play on the “Strummers & Dreamers” program on Cambridge 105 Radio. The show will be repeated on Blues and Roots Radio on Monday May 8th 7-9pm and Wednesday 10th 9-11am UK time, and the podcast will go up on Mixcloud (Strummers and Dreamers) on or around Thursday, May 11th.
My best to you all,
Deej
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