Howdy Brad....

Ha... no...you're not the only one.
He had a bad day.
It was a 'venture'...I almost didn't finish this one for upload thinking it may not stick to the wall.
Ken disagreed so I soldiered on to wrap it up in spite of my confidence issue with this one.

Howdy Elliott....
It was a different write for me but I guess it's good for one to get out of ones comfort zone occasionally. smile
Yep...I'm fortunate to have an accomplished axe player that thought enough of my material to contribute.
Maybe I did something right over the years.

G'day mate....
I've written many songs where the rhymes far are more 'perfect'.
But, I think close rhymes are just fine which makes the lyrics less common, less predictable yet still lyrical to the ear.
Close rhymes are frequently less cliche and require much deeper thought for them to work.
In hindsight I could have used: "So I scrubbed my vacation....".
That damn 'hindsight' thing likes to rear its head. smile

Gentlemen....(figure of speech smile )
I thank you all for taking the time to listen along with all the generous comments.
It's truly appreciated coming from our peers.

Have a great day!

Last edited by chulaivet1966; 04/12/23 01:38 AM.
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