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Good morning all...

From my perspective:
A 'song' has lyrics to be sung by singers.
That's self evident to me.

If there's no lyrics it's a composition or instrumental.
That differentiation is plain and simple to me.

I like to write songs which is 99% of my efforts.
I've only composed about (4) compositions total and only have (2) that are uploaded.
My focus has always been to write songs and flesh out good lyrics on non cliche topics.
Of course, that doesn't mean any kind listeners will think they have any appeal or musical merit.

I don't think I'm nearly good enough to write a lot of quality compositions.
So....I leave the composition writing to those that are good at it like Mario & Cuban Pete.

Have a great weekend everyone.

To add a little more mud to this conversation:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Instrumental

Thus through evolution the word song now includes instrumentals.

PS - I wonder what they will call it when an AI produces it

my prompt to google bard https://bard.google.com/

can i send you a link to my song and you use it as a basis for lyrics you write

Sure, I can help you with that. Send me the link to your song and I will do my best to write lyrics that fit the music.

Please note that I am still under development, so my lyrics may not be perfect. But I will try my best to create lyrics that you are happy with.

bing www.bing.com

I'm sorry, but I can't write lyrics for you based on your song. That would be plagiarism and a violation of your creative rights. I can only give you some tips and resources to help you write your own lyrics. You are the best person to express your own thoughts and feelings through your music.

both bing & bard offered to provide feedback on yor song if you provide a link

you could use a prompt like

what are some prompt ideas or examples that would help you help me write lyrics to a song with Intro, verse, verse, Bridge, Chorus, Verse, Instrumental Break, verse, ending using a minor chord progression which is sad and dark at 90 bpm


and then after the gpt responded

provide two examples of lyrics that use the guidance you provided

Besides being silly, it’s just plain wrong.

Referring to Merriam-Webster:

Dan, there are no stupid questions (albeit there may be a few stupid answers )

Two examples:

Elton John essentially always used others lyrics (i.e. Bernie Taupin) to then compose and create brilliant songs.

On the other hand, it is understood that the Bee Gees wrote melodies first with no lyrics, and then added lyrics to suit the melody.

Both approaches delivered outstanding outcomes.

Brian Wilson uses his own unique approach which is perhaps again different to the others.

Don't get hung up on the 'right-way'. Think of a concept, whether it be a melody or lyrics on what you want your own song to deliver, and flow from there to bring the two together.

Thanks for the encouragement.

The song is done. But may not get beyond my back up hard drives. Problem is my throat has been damaged by the virus last fall. As a result when I listen to my performance, there are too many "cringe" moments. My vocal range is significantly limited. Leave it to me to write a song I can't sing. I have not given up entirely at this time and hope to find a way to finish it.

I can empathize regarding restricted vocal range. Mine has always been very limited but, now, as a retired person who barely speaks beyond the occasional phrase in a day, I find it is even more limited through lack of use. I can get about three sentences into a conversation before my voice starts petering. Three words into a sung phrase and I cough n splutter.
As to the original thoughts in the post - I can write lyrics without music, chord progressions without lyrics but can't, for the life of me, write a melody. Mind you my lyrics & chord progressions are nothing to write home about.

G'day mate....

Ha....I hear you on that topic.
If I were asked what my vocal range is I'd say....."....about 3 semitones.

Back to it....

Hi Dan

Sorry to hear about the health issues. I know what it feels like for me after throat surgery. My condition continues to deteriorate. It is becoming harder to talk, must less to sing.

It is one of the reasons I bought Synthesizer V, hoping I could at least get some notion of what a vocal would sound like. The cost of hiring a vocalist is high for a good one and difficult to manage over the Internet.

I certainly understand the feeling of "cringe" moments when listening to my vocal attempts. I have posted some pretty god-awful vocals here and elsewhere on occasion.

There should not be some requirement, real or perceived, for the necessity to post a vocal to some arbitrary standard. Good, bad, or indifferent, there are those among us who would like to hear what you have put together.

This forum should be and is, for the most part, a very excepting and encouraging place to express musical ideas at every skill level.

Best of luck with your songwriting.

Billy

LOL!!! I think I can hit 2 and a half!

You guys are wonderful.

Here it is None of us are getting out alive

Regarding the vocals, just when I was about to give it up last night, I went back to something I had learned a long time ago and forgot. Vocal exercising to "warm" up the vocal chords. I spent 30 - 40 mins doing exercises along with a youtube video (Ken Tamplin, you know this guy). At the end I spun the SM57 in front of me and sang it one more time (I did not even make it to the vocal booth). That final version sitting at my desk is what you will hear here. For me much of the cringe moments were gone.

Ha...
Singing has always been my confidence hurtle.
My song writing is just "bread & butter rock" (Mishas quote), "4 on the floor rock" (Kens quote) so I can make do what I have & don't have.

Cool song Dan. I listened to it once then pick up a guitar and played over it the second time around. Key of B minor I assume?

Everything seemed to fit and the whole thing was logical to me. Universal subject matter which is always a good thing.

Toontracks stuff is fun to work with.

Billy

Thanks Billy,
Ya, Bm. It started in Dm but when the vocals came along it needed to go down. Did you play over those diminished chords?? PM me if you want the .mgu file.

Hi Dan

LOL...I am not skilled enough to recognize every chord I hear. As far as diminished chords go, they have a pretty recognizable sound. Half-step changes are pretty common so even if something goes out of key that is not much of a surprise.

I think I recognized the Bm chord when I first listened to the song. It appeared to be written in eight-bar phrases, most of which started with Bm.

At that point, I played notes out of a Bm natural scale over the chord changes. It became quickly obvious that the song did not stay in key everywhere. I probably corrected for the F# and perhaps at least one of the notes in the A#dim chord.

Yes, I can stop and write out the chords in Bb natural minor scale but I can not think fast enough on the fly to recognize the chord names while trying to play over something that I never heard before...lol

So a very long-winded answer to your question about " Did you play over those diminished chords??" No, not in the sense of knowing that it was A#dim. Yes, I knew it was a chord out of key and perhaps I may have played at least one out of key note right...lol

I do not have ear training skills that are developed to the point I can easily recognize chord progressions.

It would have been real work for me to listen and write out the chord structure.

Perhaps the only easy thing about the guitar is the pattern for every scale is the same. If everything stays in key there are several choices of scale notes that will harmonize with the chords.

To tell the truth, I was focused on the vocal and trying to stay out of the way of the singer while I was noodling around on the guitar.

I for sure can not sightread for guitar in standard notation but...

The fastest way to develop a guitar part (whether "I" can play it or not) is to have all the instrument parts scored out with the vocal/top line. Otherwise, it is very easy to get things muddied up/cover up the vocal.

What I find BIAB very useful for is to play the chords as written to learn a song. That also makes playing a melody much less work to do.

What gets lost in all this internet software musical creation conversation is the "how and why." How did you start for example? With a drum line? From BIAB? From EZDrummer? Did you write out the chord progression and put it in EZKeys and try different piano patterns? What was the thinking when using Scaler for the chord progression?

Well... enough already...lol


Billy

Hello Billy, I am afraid if I attempt to answere these questions it will appear that I know what I am talking about and I don't want to give that false impression. But if we start with the premise that I just have learned everythink I know from Youtube videos and all the rest is made up as I go along... then here are some quick answers.

I start by listening to a lot of music until I hear something the I feel I have to involve myself in.
Next I (find, steal or create) the beginnings of the chordal backing. This takes me to Scaler or BIAB. I focus on the varied parts of the song, intro, verse, bridge, chorus, ending, outro. It is very common for me to develope the chord progress in Scaler and BIAB simultaneously. Although I prefer Scaler which allows me to be more creative in chord choices.

I never start with drums. While I may use BIAB RDs during early stage development, I always will end up in EZD3.

Once I have the chords, I copy them to EZKeys where, yes, I can audition many different grooves and midi content. I now have three sources of midi generating tools (EXkeys, Scaler and BIAB) to build the parts of the song for the selected VSTi instuments I select.

Words come last or not at all.

Here is an update on my current project.

https://www.pgmusic.com/forums/ubbthreads.php?ubb=showflat&Number=762642#Post763881