Originally Posted By: dcuny
The mix is excellent, the song is melodic, the backing just what it needs to be.

Love the vocals. My only nit is that you might want to soften some of the stop consonants, like the /t/ in "but" to "bud". I love a well-articulated song where I can understand all the vocals, but it feels just a touch over-articulated at points.

Excellent work! laugh

Thanks, David, for listening and for your feedback.
It's always a difficult decision. Sometimes (and depending on the singer) changing "but" to "bud" works, but sometimes you can't really understand it.
I think Solaria is the opposite of Natalie here, so I'll keep your suggestion for her in mind in the future.