James,
REALLY cool. The only issue my ears have is with the modern kick/bass drum. Like so many BIAB Real Drum sets these days the kick is EQ/captured to cut through a desne mix based on the needs of modern metal more than anything else. It reminds me of the sound the inner foil seal of a tin of Milo makes when flicked with a finger nail.
Aside from that the mix and arrangement is solid and carries the melody really well.
You've proven you skills with melody...it'd be nice if you used your voice for it too.
Nice work.


Cheers
rayc
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