Nice one Elliott,
I think you could automate that 1st syllable a bit...it's loud/aggressive/harsh.
There's a cool tough edge to much of the vocal that echoes that 1st syllable but as an intro it's possibly a tad too much.
The vocal vibrato at the end of phrases works well.
The break down to the solo is really cool but I wasn't fussed on the solo's tone.
Good song, good performance & solid production.

Last edited by rayc; 05/09/23 02:18 PM.
Cheers
rayc
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