HI Dan ...

I've not heard any of the previous iterations of your song. But this version sounds great to me. There's some real truth in those words!

All sounds good to me! Don't have much to offer for improvements. Your vocal is far better than my vocals. And you backing tracks and arrangement all fit very nicely.

Alan


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