Ray: yep... so I did a regen on those 2 words. Better I think... I'll post the revised track in a few days

Deej56: Still working on it.... revamping the tracks and muting things to see what works..... and levels....

JC: No... the lyrics were not called into question. I'm loving that app BTW. It's a great idea starter. Total time start to finish.... hummmm... I'll let you know when I get it done.

FJ: That high end is puzzling me.... I might have to go back to the synth and play with the settings to see what can be done there. Right now, I'm burned out a bit from listening and trying to figure things out, so I am going to take some time and come back fresh in a day or so.... I'm still playing with the band to get something that I like and sounds good.... I'm drifting into a more acoustic band to start and bring things in later in the song. my next version will be up sometime next week and you'll see what I'm thinking.

I certainly appreciate all the comments and advice. Taking it to heart and seeing how it applies and working towards the final result. Stay tuned. This is a work in progress. And I'm not finished.

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