Ray, Alan, Alison
This turned out very nice.
Alison done justice on this tune. Very melodic. Beauty. Musical bed is great for this piece. Good choices on instruments.
Critical suggestions from amateur: I think too much d'esser was used on the vocals as some tails seem to be a bit cut off. Also, I think drums sound a bit distant and flat. Bass can definitely come up a bit more.

"With a REAL voice." LOL. That is funny. While vocal synth tech getting pretty sophisticated, and surely there are case uses... but I enjoy recording myself or other humans even if its very far from perfect smile

Thank you for sharing.
Misha.