First of all, I really like this whole thread where everyone is pitching in (pi). A lot to learn hear. Personally I like the gender swap of the singer. She does sound a bit too perfect it pitch. But I only have questions about the synth voices because I have no knowledge. Can you have them off-pitch a bit? Can you make them glide into the next note and waver a bit in vibrato? Still, it's such a good song, and not even a classical singer could make it sound bad.

Had to listen again for the production stuff. To my ears the mix is fine. I'm sure I can hear each piece of the production and I enjoy how you separate them. I really like the mando cutting through all those guitars. The volume of the lead could be raised to at least the volume of the vocal, but I think the tone is fine. Perhaps a bit cleaner tone would be better for the song. The song. Yeah, I really like it. One tiny nit, but there is the last stick count-in just before the song begins. I'd either drop it or include the whole count-in. Hey, I really enjoy the lyrics. Fun stuff here, Herb.

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marty

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