keith.
so sorry to hear of your loss mate.
seriously..condolences.
its very well done mate.
only thing i might suggest is mebe a bit more up tempo
and mebe a bit jaunty ??
i had a similar problem when i lost my dad n cried buckets for ages.
but as he was a huge comical bloke i knew he would
want something that wasnt too serious.
thus i did the song the whole of london town is crying on my mota site.
its a very real problem what to do, cos our loved ones want us to continue
being happy but at the same time remember them.
i frankly still cant play the london song i wrote cos the tears start coming.
so thats the reason i suggest mebe upping the tempo a tad ??
my hearfelt condolences mate.
god bless n just remember all the happy times.

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