Hi Deej ...

Those are some cool lyrics Carroll wrote! And your interpretation is spot on! As Ray said, a cool song!

Just a couple of things, for what they're worth:

1. The lead guitar is a bit too loud, in my opinion.
2. The short cello break closer to the beginning could a little louder.

Those are simply opinions - ignore if they don't work for you.

All that said, I truly enjoyed the song. Your music always sits nicely in my ears.

Terrific work!

Alan


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