I started this a little while back but it was a bit shelved it for a bit. I enjoyed playing along to & with it - a tempo & groove that suits my playing I suppose.
BIAB covers DRUMS, ORGAN, PIANO & ooohs.
Alison carries the melody.
The other bits I'm to blame for.
I did a bundle of things in this as experiments such as the grunge trick of moving from one chord to another like A5 A5/G# G5 amongst other things.
Since I only had rudimentary bits of melody I asked Alison to develop it a little but that I did want to leaves some holes.
This is what we have so far...
ParkAttack0606
I've paid attention and employed almost all suggestions.
I've not edited for length as it's only two verses and three choruses with a brief intro, solo & outro. There's is an option I will explore and post it mañana.
To assist I've altered the dynamics.
ParkAttack 0906

Here's a shorter version...I've swallowed enough sea water and have lopped off a chunk - will Poseidon be appeased? Will the swells say the tide has turned? We'll see:
Mumma's little baby loves...


Last edited by rayc; 06/09/23 02:09 PM.

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rayc
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