Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud
“When did shall become will?
How did sufficient become your fill?
What came before that isn't still?
Why does work seem to kill?”
That is a get your attention from the get-go intro to a stripped down creative lyric.
You put together an excellent studio session — ace guitars and bass of course. And, man, that is some of the best RD snare hits we’ve heard. And whatever processing you use on the bass really allows it to cut the right amount. Not easy to do at all.
We’re not the most knowledgeable re the genre but for us the vocals are where they oughta be, i.e., surrounded by all the crunchiness.
An excellent sounding production on our monitors.
As Janice told Bud when she first listened, "I was tapping away with the drums and the rhythm is stuck in my head."
Well done!
J&B

Thanks J&B,
This was a case of the words coming after the music and the 1st line of the chorus arrived as I rode into the sun on the way back from the dentist. I built the chorus around that and then dipped into G.O.M.ness for the verses.
"crunchiness" indeed.

Cheers
rayc
"What's so funny about peace, love & understanding?" - N.Lowe