Hi Ray - And Alison,

I like the heaviness of this - almost forboding.

Besides being a fine singer, her cello work is exceptional.

Realizing this is a work-in-progress, I'll just mention a thing or two that stood out to me:

1. I think the organ and ooohs could be louder.
2. The abrupt stops are ear-catchers - I really liked them
3. As a WIP, the length didn't bother me (listened all the way through). But in a final mix, I would suggest keeping it 4 minutes or shorter.

There are many ways you could take this, and it will be interesting to hear what the final mix sounds like. Keep at it - potential here! You and Alison are a great team. I know I certainly enjoyed working with you and her. Tale care, my frined ...

Alan


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