No MoreI think I got an idea for this song after hearing too many relationship songs

I thought that it is like all those action movies with the same mandatory car chases and fighting scenes in a factory building full of steel mesh bridges. I remember how my friend asked if I've seen the latest Transformers movie and I replied that I have seen the first one, so I have seen them all. Later after starting the songwriting process around the idea, I realized that feeling all at the same time would be really painful... and there's the irony of the third verse, this song is basically an agonizing relationship song. I hope this fact doesn't make you feel too uncomfortable

Also, I couldn't end this song with a minor chord... Well, you can freely tell me if I've broken songwriting rules, used too many cliches or if you just want to hear this song no more

I used Synthesizer V Asterian as the lead vocalist, I tried to make him sound like Tom Waits, but basically I just turned the breathing setting to max. Anyway, BIAB provided everything you need for a cool blues backing band.
RealDrums: CajonFolkSlow8ths
RealTracks:
Bass #2915
Acoustic guitar #2677, #2916 (x2)
Electric guitar solo Blues Pat #4072
Fiddle #1594
Violin #2337
Vocals: Synthesizer V Asterian (lead), Kevin & Solaria & Natalie (backing)
Mixed in Cakewalk by BandLab
Lyrics:
No more break-up songs
no more heartsick blues
all the million ways
to say goodbye
have been used.
Don't want to hear another one
what's done is done, get over it
find a better subject than
the same old lame relationship.
No more no more
no more no more
if I've heard one
I have heard them all.
No heart needs to bleed
sow the gracious seed
do as I say
not as I do
irony or not
I am guilty for the blues.
No more action flicks
no more guns on screen
all the million ways
to kill a man
have been seen.
Don't want to see another way
to blast without morality
shooting on a steel mesh bridge
the same old lame banality.
No more no more
no more no more
if I've seen one
I have seen them all.
No heart needs to bleed
sow the gracious seed
do as I say
not as I do
irony or not
I am guilty for the blues.
No more hurting deeds
no more things to hide
there are million ways
to wound me, I know, you've tried.
Don't want to face another game
the castaway, the passion play
in the jungle of emotions
you're the hunter, I'm the prey.
No more no more
no more no more
if I've felt one
I have felt them all.
No heart needs to bleed
sow the gracious seed
do as I say
not as I do
irony or not
I am guilty for the blues.
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Janne