Originally Posted By: Al-David
Hi Ray - And Alison,
I like the heaviness of this - almost forboding.
Besides being a fine singer, her cello work is exceptional.
Realizing this is a work-in-progress, I'll just mention a thing or two that stood out to me:
1. I think the organ and ooohs could be louder.
2. The abrupt stops are ear-catchers - I really liked them
3. As a WIP, the length didn't bother me (listened all the way through). But in a final mix, I would suggest keeping it 4 minutes or shorter.
There are many ways you could take this, and it will be interesting to hear what the final mix sounds like. Keep at it - potential here! You and Alison are a great team. I know I certainly enjoyed working with you and her. Tale care, my frined ...
Alan

Thanks Alan,
yes, she's multitalented - received a state award recently for a medley arrangement.
Org & Ooh...check.
Length - I'll ponder.


Cheers
rayc
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