Originally Posted By: PeterF
Ray
Sounding good, agree that the vocal and organ parts could come up.
Sort of a cinematic piece that could be cut around for a movie.
As an instrumental I agree it's a touch long.
Liked the bit at 4.37.
Interesting.
Peter

Thanks Peter,
I figured that the "shock" arrival of the cello after the fuzz guitar intro could be played upon. I'd had the guitar part since before the cello so a cut n run seemed reasonable.
With a verse running at around a minute and the chorus about the same editing down to a shorter "song" would be problematic though slicing after the "solo" might work.

Last edited by rayc; 06/08/23 11:32 PM.

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rayc
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