Originally Posted By: Al-David
Hi Doony ...

Welcome to the forum! Good to have you with us.

Loved it! I write a lot of music in this and similar genres (smooth jazz, r and b, soft rock, pop country).

Everything fits nicely in the mix - all tracks have their space and are distinct. I really do think it's a great song.

Two things caught my ear that might warrant another look:

1. Just a bit more higher EQ on the drums might give them some additional "color".
2. The ending was abrupt - as though you stopped it at the end of a verse, with another to follow that wasn't included.

All that said, there's a lot to like in the composition. I enjoyed it!

Wishing you the best,

Alan



Thank you Alan for the compliment and the advice, the drums did need a bit more color. Yes, the ending is in need of work, sort of a work in progress I suppose. Thank you again very much.