I listened to the third iteration. I was immediately drawn into the piece. I love the dark mood. I could listen to the cello all day, so I'm sure I wouldn't have minded the longer version. smile

I like that guitar bit that comes in at about 5:05. Just a small item, but I thought it was an effective add.

I was going to ask who wrote the melody, but my question was answered when I read through your description of the track.