Hi Ray ...

I think you have some really good bones for a finished project. And yes, as usual, your vocal could be somewhat louder. I agree with Floyd's suggestion of some big strings or a (biting - my thought) organ.\

Your vocals are always much better than you suggest they are. Might I suggest a little more high EQ on the drums?

You're off to a running start - I would speculate not too far from a finished effort.

Sounding better than really good! I would guess you're not far away from finishing this. I predict it will be spectacular!

Alan


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