Hi Alan,

Terrific song, melody and feel. Also really liked your vocals - this type of music really suits your voice.

A couple of minor suggestions:

1. Vocals - I like the upfront treatment. Maybe take a little off the vocals in the lower frequencies to stop any mic proximity effect. This is only apparent in some phrases.

2. Bass - every now and then the bass plays a deep bass note and it pops right out of the mix. Easily fixed in the mix - no need to re-record.

I only make these kind of suggestions on songs I really like.

Great work.

Best Regards
Nigel


Nigel Spiers
Christchurch, New Zealand
info@nzacoustics.com