Love the song, the lyrics, and your singing. Great arrangement.

To my very non-expert ears, there's still something lacking in the mix. All the elements are there, but they don't seem to be connected together. It sounds a bit "clinical".

Did I mention I love the song? laugh


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?