Originally Posted By: rayc
Floyd,
terrific narrative, excellent melody and the arrangement is spot on.
The vocal? They're your voice which is always a great start. This is no exception...really well sung & emoted.


appreciated, ray....




Originally Posted By: BabuMusic
Floyd, your lyrics are always so much better than the norm. Man, you write about many things you are NOT, but the things you ARE are so much more remarkable. I love how you take it from the kid to the grown-up and maintain your code. The melody makes the flow seamlessly, and the variation between chorus and verse are perfect learning tools for struggling songwriters. You always manage a clever write with a hook that makes the listener return for more. Yeah, you're one of those. Thanks for all.


Marty - thanks for the great review!


Originally Posted By: Dewey_MI
Not much to say that Marty hasn't already said. So well done Floyd and Bill! The power of the co-write!!


Thanks, Dewey...

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