Hi Donny,

Welcome at this forum!
You made a nice, but short, song
I agree with those who told you how to improve your song.
The melody is just fine, but when it comes to the colouring and brightness of the song you can gain more.

I had to walk that path too and still am learning how to improve things.
But as long as the melodies are fine you have gained a lot!

I saw another song from your hand here, I will listen to that one too.
Maybe you already have improved so much there.
We'll see!

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130